雅思写作应怎么注意语言的使用

雅思听说读写最不好拿分的就是写作
而翻开任意一篇低分作文
就会发现考官评语中总会包含词汇这一项
到底什么样的词汇才能获得考官的放心呢?
以下是我们从考官范文中摘录的一些非常具有代表性又可以称得上是万能的句子我们来看一下当中的高分词汇感受一下~
1. It shows a fluctuation of the water consumption between 1900 and 2000.
指点:fluctuation表示频繁的波动,替换我们平时最常见的change.
2. It may be necessary to consider other measures,such as tax incentives or childbenefit payments for small families only.
指点:incentives意为刺激,鼓励,替代policy。
3. I think an ability to keep clear perspectives in life is a more essential factor in achieving happiness.
指点:perspectives意为观点,视角,看法,替代idea,opinion,view等。
4. Job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of that person.
指点:wellbeing意为幸福感,安宁,福利,替代happiness。
5. It’s certainly true that the position of women in society has undergone a dramatic change in the past twenty years.
指点:undergone是undergo的过去分词,意为经历,遭受,替换experience。
6. But in recent years the effects of those factors have been diminished.
指点:diminish意为减少,降低,替换drop,reduce,decrease等。
7. In this short time they have made a tremendous impact on our lives.
指点:tremendous意为巨大的,惊人的,替换big,great等。
8. Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent.
指点:exceptional意为优越的,杰出的,替换good。
9. The media is controlled exclusively by large companies in some countries.
指点:exclusively意为专门地,专有地,替换only,specially等等。
10.percentage has grown progressively to 15%-17% by now.
指点:progressively意为逐渐地,替换gradually。